I wrote this one last night. Got most of what I wanted out, but still feels kinda incomplete. Oh well...
It was my day to shine
But I was outshone.
My day to be the best
But someone was just better.
I hoped for some assurance
That I mattered.
That I had made a difference.
I hoped for some recognition,
Maybe someone who had realised
That I wasn't the black spot in the background,
But the colour that made the picture.
I hoped to be the notes
that held the symphony together.
Instead,
All I became was a single,
lilting tune,
Lost in the medley.
I wanted to be noticed,
Needed someone to acknowledge
My presence,
But I guess I just faded away,
Got lost
in translation..............
8 comments:
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LOVE this one.
thank you :D But I actually think it can be better..
1.ur making me too senti....
2.i hv an assurance for u.Thoughts and words are alway with u lilting tune....
3. Realized & Recognized
Thank you :)
That I wasn't the black spot in the background,
But the colour that made the picture.
:)!
Nice, :)
@ akanksha - thank you. I like the symphony line better myself :)
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