Monday, August 18, 2008


This one I wrote for the heck of it. I think it came out very well.

She looked at them
They were laughing
Unaware of her presence.
She watched them
Enjoy without her
Her heart grew sadder
The space in it grew.
She turned
And started
Walking away.
She walked slowly
Hoping someone would notice
Waiting for the voice
Calling for her to stop
Waiting for the friendly hand
On her shoulder.
But no one came
No one even cared.
Her eyes filled with
Lonely tears
And her heart shattered
Into small pieces.
She was left alone
With no one to love her
And she walked away,
A small speck
Receding into the


Rohini said...

This is sad. But I feel I can relate to it somewhere. I think everyone has a phase where they feel unwanted. I like the short lines which create the impact.

Ayesha said...

Thank you :)